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Attribution problems

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This article was obviously copied, seeing from the earliest revisions, there are blacklinked text that is obviously square-bracket reference numbers, and blacklinked modify edit links, and blacklined WHOM tags. There is still no proper attribution of what pages from where were adapted to form this article. This clearly breaks WP:CWW and Wikipedia's copyright licensing WP:LICENSE (CC/GFDL) -- 65.92.246.142 (talk) 14:53, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sources of my page

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I didn't tried to violate anything actually I tried out translation so the content in this page is majorly a translation from the existing French Wikipedia article at fr:Anna Menon; see its history for attribution. They were the first to make this article. While editing I included some portions from external sources that are given as references in this page And the ultimate credit (if needed to be included) is for https://polarisprogram.com/team/ as they copied most of the matter from this page only. I just made a translation please 65.92.246.142 I want my article to be approved for revival Chinakpradhan (talk) 02:21, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Chinakpradhan: You need to ask Artem.G (talk · contribs) about what he detected when he scanned the article -- 65.92.246.142 (talk) 03:19, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Artem.G:, sir you might be busy but please can you tell why you denied the Declining submission for revival of this draft sir. Chinakpradhan (talk) 05:20, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
plus @Artem.G: sir this was french translation of fr:Anna Menon not copyedit though wording is similar. i dont know even a word in french. but i assure you, i didnt even copied a word from https://polarisprogram.com/team/, the original website. if you find anything i need to do more on this article, i will try my best to to achieve that. but please i spent hours to make this article. i don't want this to be deleted. all my works will be useless, then sir.
@ZimZalaBim: sir you can can also help out if you are willing to do that. Chinakpradhan (talk) 05:32, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I've done plenty to try to clean up this article that has veered on the border of WP:FANCRUFT. --ZimZalaBim talk 15:22, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Chinakpradhan: I do understand you, but please check the polarisprogram website. See, for example, this sentence:
"is Lead Space Operations Engineer at SpaceX, where she manages crew operations development and serves in mission control as mission director and crew communicator" (from draft) and
"is a Lead Space Operations Engineer at SpaceX, where she manages the development of crew operations and serves in mission control as both a Mission Director and crew communicator." (from source)
It almost identical. One more:
"she led the implementation of Dragon's crew capabilities, helped create the role of Crew Communications Operator, and developed critical operational responses to vehicle emergencies such as fire or cabin depressurization. Anna served in mission control on several Crew Dragon missions, such as Demo-2, Crew-1, CRS-22, and CRS-23." (draft),
"she has led the implementation of Dragon’s crew capabilities, helped create the crew communicator operator role, and developed critical operational responses to vehicle emergencies such as a fire or cabin depressurization. Anna served in mission control during multiple Dragon missions, such as Demo-2, Crew-1, CRS-22, and CRS-23." (source) Again, identical. And please reference that source, half of the draft lacks any references. Artem.G (talk) 08:33, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Ok @Artem.G: trying my best to improve. Chinakpradhan (talk) 08:45, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Artem.G: sir, I did rephrasing of all the the items that seemed to be identical from polarisprogram website, here. Is rephrasing needed more or should it be suffice to get a renewal sir. Chinakpradhan (talk) 18:02, 17 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Seems to be ok, and the draft is already in the mainspace. Artem.G (talk) 12:00, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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