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Declined by KylieTastic 26 days ago. Last edited by KylieTastic 26 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Subdelírio é uma banda brasileira de rock alternativo formada em 2022, com base em São Paulo capital. Originalmente, a formação da banda era composta por Amanda Veneri (vocal), Hideki Odo (baixo) e Gustavo Brandão (guitarra) porém em 2023, Bruno La Valle (bateria) se juntou ao grupo, completando a configuração atual da banda.

Dentro do cenário do rock underground e independente paulista, a banda se tornou notável pelo seu som único, fruto da fusão das influências de cada um dos membros que vão do emo, rock clássico, blues, funk, até o samba.

A banda se mostrou presente em shows e festivais independentes na região de São Paulo e em outras cidades do Estado.

História

Em agosto de 2024, a banda lançou o seu primeiro single, entitulado "Saída"^[1]. Algum tempo depois, em setembro, o segundo single "nó(s)." ^[2] foi lançado.

References

[1] ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUX0JZ_bWPM

[2] ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=00bVcDNK77c

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